How can you explain how much you love someone when they won’t even listen to a word you say?
It’s like talking to a brick wall that only hears the negative and no good!
I love someone with my whole heart but I don’t know if I am still loved
She’s pushed me away further then I thought possible
It feels like I’m alone again and no one will come save me this time
When I needed someone the most no one was there…….. Not even her
It made me feel like I had done something wrong and I’m being punished
I don’t know if love is how to explain it anymore…
When you love someone you don’t just turn your back when they need you the most
Did you ever think that I said what I did because I needed someone and you’re the only person I trusted?
You said I was obsessing and I admit I may have been a bit
You just don’t realize that for me to obsess there has to be something majorly wrong
But I guess you will never know this as you’ve just pushed me away and refused to have anything to do with me
I don’t want to sound like a bitch or someone who is trying to get back at someone
I’m just writing how I see it……
I’m writing what you refused to hear….
I don’t want excuses…..
I don’t want reasons for why you’ve done what you did…..
I don’t know what I want really….
But I know for sure I don’t want to love someone who turns at the first site of need….
It’s pointless in the end when you know that you won’t receive any love from the one person who you thought loved you.
To this person I don’t have anything to say but for as long you push me away the longer you’re hurting me….and my heart can’t handle much more!
Author notes
This is written for one person in perticular.....She probably wont read it but hey....oh and keep in mind this is written at lik 1am and ive just finshed work...if it doesnt make sense just tell me.
Flic
Say it how it is
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wonderful
yea this foes make sence and you are telling the persson how you feel and i think that person is lucky that you love them the way you do xox great rite hun mwa marvolus<< i know thats not spelt ritexoxox but yeh love ya wb
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This line- I’m writing what you refused to hear….
Love that line.
It resounds well. And sometimes it's the only way.
I hope you ok now...? -
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im sorry... you mean everything to me and im sorry its my fault you didnt do anything wrong and i didnt mean to upset you I love you no matter how much u think i dont I will always love you and i messed up but i plan on being there whenever you need me ok?
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hey babe... this is good really gets your point across! i'm sorry you feel like this! remember i am always here for you. love you and your fantastic poetry! xx
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Love that is not returned is hurtful but there's nothing you can do about it except to try to move on.
You have written a lovely and tender poem, 'lil sis. 
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I have felt like this so many times it kind of mafe me ponder the complexities insie the mind...
Hoe love can be so cruel as to cripples you into depression and sadness beyond anything.
For 1 am your poetry spoke a lot ^.^
Well done love
Keep writing
venting emotion
Blair
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