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Howling




 

   
i imagine us as wolves
paired for life
 
we move together, natural


i forget about hanging breasts
and extra flesh on my thighs


there's no vanity
in the animal kingdom







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  • AJ Morelli gold member
    July 8, 2008

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    I like this a lot, especially the wolves paired for life, great line...

    there is a brutal honesty here, on multiply levels, nice


    really good entry here


    al


  • Cat gold member
    July 1, 2008

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    i like where you went with this-
    good solid thoughts
    that we all think about
    and find ourselves not thinking about in the right moments

    m


  • Dalaney gold member
    June 12, 2008

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    what a zinger of an ending...just loved reading this Love, Lane


  • PerVirtuous
    June 12, 2008

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    You have hit the proverbial nail on its metaphorical head. There is no place for vanity in a spiritual life. Great take.