a new dawn gives hope to scattered
remains of life's formations strewn
along the sandy water's edge of seeking
more without a trace or the limits
of time
Author notes
picture prompt (click to view)
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2409/375.jpg?1213274565
by e. mcdermott
28 words
A contest entry
- Time to PIF Picture Prompt #10 => Quick-ish by marlene47.
725 points, ended June 21, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like this - all in one breath depth.
Hope to the strewn remains found on the edge of seeking more (great!).
Then you blow it clear across the known limits - moving from searching along the edge into the eternal/infinite middle. Thank you for your outer limits entry. ( I loved the sensation I had reading this)
Marlene -
i like this very much. very interesting take on the prompt!
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