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Piece of Heaven

Every time I'm with you, feeling you wrapped in my arms is like a piece of Heaven.
Kissing you under the stars as you take me on a magical flight is like experiencing a small piece of Heaven.
Boy having you around me is like a small piece of Heaven.

And I go crazy if your near me 24/7. I dreamed about experiencing something so unreal with you.

Honey I hope I can experience a piece of Heaven with you everyday for the rest of our lives.

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  • TheGreatestLove
    June 13

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    this is romantic

    but i strongly believe it can be furthur improved by breaking up those long lines into proper stanzas.

    thank you and best of luck