Silent mayhem

Commotion washes over significant turmoil -
paved with pebbles consisting of tears ...

being lonely is not the same as being alone

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http://evamcdermott.deviantart.com/art/On-the-Beach-69191730

20 words

A contest entry

Time to PIF Picture Prompt #10 => Quick-ish by marlene47. 725 points, ended June 21, 2008, 10 entries
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Tattboy
November 20, 2008

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A very interesting take on the picture that would also go perfectly as publicity for the "On The Beach" movie.

VERY well done!

marlene47
June 21, 2008

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Quite a wave image you create - commotion washing over turmoil above tears... and all this in lonely silence.
Thank you for your striking entry.
Marlene

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