Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Angelic Dewdrops

By the jagged tips of the moss laden summit--
where white tailed aviators float on moistened updrafts--
dewdrops clinging to feathers defy gravity,
angelic,
and soar between Heaven and Earth.

Author notes

Where does the spirit stop moving?

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • dwarr08
    June 16, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    it's nice written but I don't really get its point


  • Lavender Butterfly
    June 13, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    this is so beautifully detailed... x


    • twaintwine
      June 16, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      You have a way with words, and brevity, it appears, is your hallmark! My aloha to you for such an inspiring contest!


  • twaintwine
    June 12, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Angels and such,God in nature revealed, the world behind the world, my original music at www.nakedadam.net