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wait for me

blinking back the tears
i slip down
watching the sun
hit the stone

glitter and sparkling
as i fight the pain
wet grass beneath me
blue sky's above

i watch and lose  
as my tears stream
a sob in my throat
as i bow my head

the curtain of hair
my only defences
from prying eyes
in their own pain

slowly i lay
the rose down
on the hump
of fresh dirt

gently stroking
the petals

velvet soft
like your skin

"i love you
so much "
my whispered
sob fills the air

fingers trembling
my vision blurred
a life cut so short
i trace the words

a man of honor
a man loved
your name and dates
meant to explain a life

another sob
fresh wave of tears
pain slicing
under my skin

"i'll be with u
soon my love"
the affect of the pills
finally hitting

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  • XxPan3xX
    June 30, 2008

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    That was remarkable!!!
    Well done!!!
    and thanx for the wicked comment!

    also this poem is now one of my favs!!!
    hehe


  • SomethingPoetic
    June 12, 2008
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    oh my oh my word