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Forever more

I love your smile
I love you all the while
You make happy
Please dont get all sappy

Baby tell me everything you wish for me to know
Don't give anyone but me a show
If someone else touches you
they'll wish they never knew

They messed with me
Now they'll be
six feet under
I'm the cause of all the thunder

They got me pissed
and I know I hissed
They wont be around to call you a whore
I'll be sure they are dead "FOREVER MORE"

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  • boring brunette
    June 12, 2008
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    cool

    lines 1-4 and 13,14 were awsome.