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Rainbow

Revealing colors in the faR
Azure clouds, like water in the seA
Individuality, like you and I
Nothing can compare, to summer raiN
Beautiful, like the ocean’s ebB
Over the land, sometimes in twO
Wonderful image of which you shoW

Author notes

Shadow (mirror) Acrostic
ends each line with the same letter as the begining line

"Love makes the world go round."

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  • misshugglebugglez
    September 6, 2008

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    wahoo! i love it! I like the form of the words, it is creative and interesting. "Individuality, like you and I
    Nothing can compare, to summer rain
    Beautiful, like the ocean’s ebb
    Over the land, sometimes in two"... this was my favorite part of your fabulous poem! good luck, and thank you for entering! =)
    -Adria/ pb fudge


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    June 26, 2008

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    VERY CREATIVE

    SO WELL DONE

    A PLEASURE TO READ

    THANK YOU FOR YOUR ENTRY

    PLEASE DON'T REPLY TO MY COMMENT

    TO KEEP THE CONTEST ANONYMOUS

    GOD BLESS...


  • james119
    June 25, 2008
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    nicely done !


  • storiesuntold gold member
    June 25, 2008
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    Done very well

    I havent tried this but it looks like it would be quit hard to master


  • UnManned4Ever
    June 13, 2008

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    that is so neat! I love it! A little blinding at first cause I had to blink at all the purpleness Great work once again


  • gmmike
    June 12, 2008
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    Nice I like the way you did it.

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