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August sky

 

Time has become ripe in the golden leaves that dance across the August sky:

 

these tiny capsules reflecting God's splendour...

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  • maralisa silver member
    June 14, 2008
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    congratulations on your shiny x


  • Lavender Butterfly
    June 13, 2008
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    how beautiful... x


  • islekine
    June 13, 2008
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    Lovely 20!

    Best wishes in the contest.
    Write on!


  • maralisa silver member
    June 12, 2008

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    Time has become ripe in the golden leaves that dance across the August sky: God's splendour reflecting into his children's hearts...wow I love this it is beautiful good luck in the contest


  • harriet567
    June 12, 2008

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    Brilliant!

    I love the way you have used the words to paint a picture of the August sky - the leaves dancing, God's splendour reflecting etc. Great imagery.

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