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My enchantment

Tempt me again, 
    hypnotize

 inner dreams

 with 

fulgurous emerald
scattered so delicately
among ferns,

and my friends
the fairies.

Hidden desires
mine now, to hold
within curious hands,
to disperse

to skies
in

 one breath.

Newfound freedom
finds
me fascinated
while
I whistle

paradisiacal
tunes.

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  • Lady Eventide
    June 14, 2008

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    Very beautiful. Paints a wonderful image, your choice of words. Magical. Also, separation of words worked with this, as well...making it seem even more magical. Good job on gold.


  • tainfinite
    June 13, 2008
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    taiinfinite

    congrats rindercella,very nice read and so full of imagery


  • luna-midnight
    June 12, 2008
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    shit im tired, forgot these little suxxers, here ya are


  • luna-midnight
    June 12, 2008

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    woo woot woot!!!!
    go you for gold, this poem rocks, congrats and take care
    stephanie


  • fortyninereasons
    June 12, 2008

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    Your piece is just lovely. Softly spoken Cin, congrats on the gold! Love Juls


  • Cannonsfire
    June 12, 2008

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    Beautifully done Cin and well done on your gold shiny thing Love, C


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 12, 2008

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    What a magical piece! Really captures the picture and also speaks of emotion, desires and freedom found! Beautifull descriptiveness in this.. love it!


  • Angelflower gold member
    June 12, 2008

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    You did a wonderful job sissy..
    I really loved this ... I would say
    that your muse might be back? lol..
    At least it would seem so with this write.
    You created such a vivid image!!!
    Best of luck!!!

    Angel


    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      June 12, 2008
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      yeah i think its temporary..lets just say something arrived tonight, which means im not pregnant...so im feeling down now, but doesnt take way from feeling proud of the write of course


  • sailor ptolema
    June 12, 2008

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    que bonita!!!

    yay! I love this ! omg, I LOVE LOVE " fulgurous emerald"!! I can just see the color flashing in the forest!...its a perfect phrase, really!
    its goes SO well with the picture!
    good lukc in the contest~!!!


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    June 12, 2008

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    yes it was worth the wait. wow, this was so captivating. almost as if the reader is being taken to another place.

  • lowercase prelude gold member
    June 12, 2008
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    awesome. can't wait

  • Angelflower gold member
    June 12, 2008
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    Yay!!!! can't wait to read!!!!


  • Weltt
    June 12, 2008
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    Woohoo, go Cin!!!!

    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      June 12, 2008
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      yes im in shocked...i wrote something heheh, maybe the drought is over


      • Weltt
        June 12, 2008
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        Wonderfully enthralling and captivating the senses. What a magical place you have wove with your words. Amazing!

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