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Throught the hate, the lies, deception,
all the anger, pain, depression,
I can't find but one exception
to the laws that rule the world.
One way to escape the horror
of a smashed and shattered mirror
even so, the world seems clearer
as my hopes and dreams are hurled.
Nothing matters anymore,
can't get in through locked up doors,
darkness falls forevermore,
leaving me with tears of blood.
Cold steel chains that end in shackles,
demons circling like jackals,
all I hear are faceless cackles
surrounding me like cold dark flood.
Nothing I can do or say
makes the heartache go away
slipping further every day
into a perpetual night.
Dreamless sleep that does not end,
hearts impossible to mend,
liars who no longer pretend,
all these horrors I will fight.

Author notes

a lot longer than my others.
this one doesnt have a subject. i kinda just wrote. and this came out.
it actually rhymes! and its not a song!

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  • LivInThisObsession
    July 8, 2008

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    very dark, flows very well....great job. this is definitely a very good poem, I see why you would think it's your best.


  • infernalxfidelity
    June 12, 2008

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    mmmm...i really like this. it has the dark angst macabre feeling to it. and it rhymes amazingly well. the flow is perfect too. this is excellent. good job.