I feel so lost without you living here,
loosing you in this life was my biggest fear.
Sorrow so deep I feel as though I'm going to die,
only nine months this weekend, I still wonder why.
I love you my precious son my first born child,
you grew into a handsome man so wild and mild.
Depression lives within the depths of my heart,
sorrowful weeping from that day we did part.
Finding you dead lying there on the floor,
I'm still in shock trying to open that door.
So young and so handsome, I loved you so much,
it hurts so deep, I know you loved me a bunch.
All those dreams and wishes aren't going to come true,
dreaming of the wedding, grandchildren, you being happy too.
Just in one day, so shocked, my heart completely shattered,
life came to a halt, your life was over, now I feel battered.
Such deep love I shall always have for you my son,
grieving the loss of you I shall forever scream, I feel spun.
Watch over me Matt, your mom, because my depression is strong,
so lost for the love we shared, my sorrow seems unending and long.
A contest entry
- Love,Depression,Sorrow, by XxunBeautifulxX.
300 points, ended June 24, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Can you imagine my pierced heart of deep love for my son due to his death that my sorrow is so deep and my depression hasn't left. Can you just imagine?
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Very powerful write
you have penned here, Kelle, right from the emotions of your heart. It is very sad to me I can only try to imagine what it must feel like to you. I believe in you Kelle and pray for you.
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Powerful
Such an intense write. So full of deep and provoking feelings. Best of luck in the contest.
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beautifully poetic words, that do so express your pain Aunty Kelle..You know how I feel for you on this, i wont rattle on again, but I will thank you for sharing this, i know it helps but also is hard
Cin
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A Beautiful Ending Kelle...
I love it!!! It is all amazing and heartfelt...You spilled your emotions out on the page perfectly in this piece...Beautiful dear just beautiful!!!~~Toni~~ -
I can feel the sadness...
It brought atear to me eye.
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Still it is so beautifully sad.........
ANd this, I feel is an exellent way to get your sorrow and pain out and if typing it out is the way then more power to you...Such a wonderful picture of MAtthew here and he is soooo handsome and so young and full of promise with his motorcross riding...still we have to believe God has a plan and even though we mess it u sometimes, he is still so much larger than we or this world and has it in the palm of his hand always controlling it.....I love this it is heartwrenching and I will read it when you have completed it honey!!! But so far it is simply wonderful!!!!~~Toni~~
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Sometimes there are just not enough words to express your sorrow and pain, but you have conveyed your message so clearly. Good luck in the contest.
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I love this...Lovely job...straight from the heart that is always good...but why did you enter it into my contest if it wasn't finished?
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Sis,
I know you're not done with this one, but had to read anyways. This has brought a new wave of tears to my eyes this morning.
I will finish reading this when you get it done.
Love ya
Nyetta
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A sad feeling and a tragedy to remember. May the bad memories fade and the good rule your thoughts. Very emotional straight from your heart.
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Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh sweetie ~ my heart is deep with sorrow for you ~ I will come back and read when you are finished sending love and your way
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HI....
I read that the piece is not finished, but you know me, I just had to take a peek. I wiil always have the sense that Brandon was one of my children. You have told us sooo much about him, that I feel as if I knew him personally, he has even touched my heart and soul. The one line, that will stick with me is-you grew into a hansome man wild and mild. You are forever in my prayers.One brilliant poetess.
POETDONTKNOWIT
PENNING IT HER OWN WAY
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