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Dust Runner Lover

A lover's Kiss...
Ecstasy in a heart beat
A lover's pill...
Just as sweet

The feline eyes
Watching with lust
Masking my lips
With lily-white dust

Her icy breath
In the Moonlight eclipse
Whispering love
While licking my lips

My dust runner lover
A night of Bliss
Falling for her
As I am lost to the Abyss

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Written December 29th, 2003

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  • JadedWanderer
    January 20, 2004
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    Alright. I'll be honest. I don't understand this, but I like it. Seems rather like a drug addiction, but that could just be me.
    Anywho, thanks.
    Jade