The pain, the sorrow
The sadness,that I feel
You broke it, stepped on it
And shattered it into a billion and one pieces
It cannot be taped, glued or stapled back together
You have forever broken it
And left a scar so sharp it stabs,
Every time I take a deep breathe
No one can replace it, fix it or even
Edit it; it is broken, and forever it shall be
Author notes
Prompt Word: Broken Heart
Option: 38
Lyrics: Option 4
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Comments
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I'm sorry. I want the whole prompt in the author's notes. I'm lazy, and don't like clicking back and forth to find which prompt it is.
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Beautiful and sad. The pain is all too real in this world. Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing.
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A well-known feeling. To be human seems to mean being easily broken, and feeling like we are broken forever, unfixable. And even though time heals to a certain extent, that scar is always there.
"It cannot be taped, glued, or stapled back together"--like that line the best.
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"It cannot be taped, glued or stapled back together"
you must not have used ducktape
but seriously this was a very moving and a very deep poem,I could feel what you were feeling through this poem. and there is something to be said about that.
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thank you for entering my contest. I think having a broken heart is one of the worst feelings in the world. Excellent write and good luck
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Sad
That was a very deep poem. The heart...such a sad thing it is, since it cannot withstand everything that's thrown at it.
Very well-wrote poem and I am happy I got the chance to read it. :]
♫Kori♫
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