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Serenity

Serenity! Do you find it ironic
The night always follows the day.
Maybe it's time
For us to just walk away.

Oh, Serenity, Something has got to give.
The truth is hurting More that all the
Lies that we had lived.
I don't know If I can handle this.

Serenity! Do you find it ironic
The night always follows the day.
Maybe it's time
For us to just walk away.

Oh, Serenity, Do you have a fear
Of rejection like me? Do you ever feel like
You're dying like I am? Trying to breathe,
But all you can do is Bleed  ... sweeter (sweeter).

This means everything. It's not about waiting
For storms to pass over,
As long as you dance In the rain.
Lightning can strike us tonight if it wants to.

Serenity! Do you find it ironic
The night always follows the day.
Maybe it's time (Serenity)
For us to just walk away. (You're so Ironic)
This means everything. (So hypocritical)
(Serenity) Are we walking alone? (Maybe it's time)
(It's dark tonight) Are we walking together? (For us to walk away)
(Is this all a dream?) This means everything to me (Kiss my lips)
(One last time) (Or walk away)
(Kiss my lips like never before) (I'm sorry)
(I died today) (I'm sorry)
(It's time to walk away) (I'm sorry)
(oh)(Just walk away)

Author notes

... And all he wanted was one last dance under a cloud covered sky. It didn't seem like too much to ask. After all, she's the one who brought the rain. So, why did she always fear the thunder he could bring? It only seems a little bit hypocritical that she used to fear what she herself had now brought upon him. Maybe we're lying to ourselves again. Maybe this all means more than you could possibly imagine. Maybe she's only one more whore he had once again mistaken for an angel ...

How does this song come across to you? What does it seem to mean?

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  • gypsyfish
    July 12
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    pretty good!!

    my first impression was, this person is a little obsessed. and also, maybe he couldn't really make up HIS mind. making this not completely on the other person, (serenity).
    and you also sound very young... ha/ha (not in a bad way, just young.)

    good work. keep writing.
    love gypsyfish

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    At first when i was reading i wasnt so sure, i thought at first serenity was being used in the wrong context but as i read more and more i actually started to fit it i. Towards the end line 24 - 30 really started to touch my heart especially as i felt something very similar once to what i believe you are describing. I absolutely love the way you have written it and i look forward to reading more work from you.

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