Misted views
befuddled by haze of love,
how my feelings
take shape
of heart
on panes of life,
only to fade away
in water dripping down.
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That's profound.
Nicely expressed.
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Thanks a lot !
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Really nice poem, goes well with the picture. it is short and simple and i really like it. The last couplet at the end finishes the poem off nicely. really enjoyed reading it.
all the best
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I am glad you enjoyed it!
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excellent
very good depiction. loved the way u took it. very philosophical one.
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Thanks Aliya...You will know what this feels like...more than anyone else
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lovely imagery and nice metaphores.
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Thank you...
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wow. this is simply amazing I loved this- you have penned this so beautifully!
you deserve gold!! 
this was honestly awesome!!
sorry for the thousand exclamations
I think I am in love with your words.
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Glad you enjoyed this so much...no need to be sorry!
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BRAVO!BRAVO!
I love this!!!! its so sad, yet quite poignant!
wonderful, wonderful!
good luck in the contest!!!!!!!!!
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Thank you so much for your wishes!
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i like the imagery this piece possesses. very good.
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Thank you!
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Brilliant imagery in this well penned piece.. a sad write!
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Thanks dear..a bit sad yeah!
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Wonderful imagery here!!! Very well penned piece of beauty in sadness... I loved this! Great take on the prompt!!!
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Thank you so much for your lovely words
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wow!
this piece contains sdness, happiness, depth and simplicity all into one.
I love how things are not clear but murky and hazy.
"on panes of life,"
a good phrase relating well to the picture. The last two lines captured the essence of the whole poem and really made it your own. Good luck!
transit~
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