Back then,
We were known
For being
Hungry hungry
Hippos
But now
We are known
For being
Hip Hippopotamuses
Just for sleeping
In the mud
I love being a hippo
Author notes
Photo prompt + 30 words exactly
Photo Prompt:
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2408963
A contest entry
- YOU THINK YOU ARE HIP TO LOVING LARGE? 30 words - #85- by Roaddog Wolf.
475 points, ended June 23, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love the alliteration....
Tongue twisters are fun. I never was very good at Hungry Hungry Hippos. Whenever I go to the zoo, I see those hippos rolling around in the mud with their mouths wide open. I can tell they do love being in the mud.
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Now that is kind of some hip hippos there, fun read thank you for entering and good luck in the contest
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lol... cute poem again... you are doing such a wonderful job on these poems!!! Good luck in the contest!!!
Hugs,
Beth
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