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still and silent

Missing image


I'll build my church in the sand
as the sky drops by to see ~
the earth colliding with heaven

it's where God removes his shoes...

Author notes

The picture is the prompt =>
http://evamcdermott.deviantart.com/art/On-the-Beach-69191730

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  • Desire gold member
    June 12, 2008

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    Beautiful!!

    Love Your take on the picture prompt and takes the reader by the hand~ Magnificent once again


    Last line pulls also tugs~
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 12, 2008

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    Another stunning poem! The imagery is just captivating! Even makes me have faith...