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Typhoon

Licked clean the footsteps
of a forgotten
love,
lover
(loveless).

left the loveless
lover
without
love
alone
at dawn
(the worst time
to be alone)
without lover
(without love).

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  • marlene47 silver member
    June 21, 2008

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    Yes, a typhoon could do the damage. Fun, despite the topic with all those parenthetic extensions. Thank you for your stormy (without calm) entry.
    Marlene