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sitting-out.


do we care that days curve
into shapeless shadows at night;

crawling around the house
as we walk in madness and shout?

no one probably notices.

all the while, they shadows
turn and spin; until all the love

is tumbled out and dry.

as reason sits through madness
and laughs grate against smiles

the world tumbles out of
thousand souls; and still we wait

counting statistic and algebra.

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  • Beauty Of Silence
    June 12, 2008

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    hehe! this was funny (okay, i know it was supposed to be a serious topic and all, but your last line made it sound funny... algebra, it reminded me of our online math tests >.<)

    Anyhoo, back to the serious issue... this was beautifully written... seems like you're very passionate about this subject aren't you? Your lines had brilliant metaphors... and very creative words and phrases used gal! Crazy creative chicken you! >.< Sad poem... but like i said, ur last line made me laugh... okay, i amuse myself in the wierdest ways dont i? love u loads!!! and waiting to see ya again! be blessed buddy!

    ~RANJI