Attempts to unfold mind,
slowly giving way
to knots on body.
Soothing tobacco,
spawning inside,
to free tresses
and party poppers.
Inconspicuous nicotine reign
gets the last laugh.
In a list
A contest entry
- Another Quickie, Last One From Me Today!! by Weltt.
550 points, ended June 12, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very well penned. I loved the last
two lines. Congrats on the green
shiny. Keep up the good work.
All the best to you.
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Thank you so much for your kind words!
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Wonderful
Very well done. A great take on the prompt. Congratulations on the honorable mention
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Thank you!
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Loved the last two lines. powerful and to the point. A well composed piece of writing!
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Thank you
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A very interesting piece defined from the image prompt. Well penned and gritty in its appeal. Nicely done!!!
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Thank you dear!
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