Tranquil thoughts
Skin smoothing
Over impressions
Left listlessly floundering
Emblazoned and blistered
Hurt over endless thoughtlessness
Believing in somewhere
Only left lost in disillusion
Drifting aimlessly
Waiting for ripples
Or currents of thoughts
To guide me into
One last
Whirlwind of heartless emotions
A contest entry
- Another Quickie, Last One From Me Today!! by Weltt.
550 points, ended June 12, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is an amazing and elegant take on the image. You wove beauty from the simplicity of the imagery - granting depth far beyond. I really enjoyed this!!!
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Loved the flow of emotions wove between the lines of this poem. well done and thanks for entering!
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