It felt so good
What a rush
To have them scream-
Then a permanent hush
To plan revenge
and have success fulfilled
Now I know why other's kill
Author notes
understanding
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may i ask what inspired you or is this just a random write
wow ... this is sorta creepy ... it's a very good write and all but i just think of my brother when i read this and yea
i saw prfect grammer and spelling and everything was lyrical ... there a grea conceprt to this and a great flow ....
i say poems like this would be great 1 or 2 verses longer bet hey it's your poem and the only thing that matters is that you like it even if i do
i rate this 8/10
and can i use this poem for an example for a poetry gallary im running?
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I was inspired by my rapist father.
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