Through prose and poems
I have shed emotions.
Pleading for attention,
looking for your adulation
while you glaze over
at the mere mention of devotion.
No more...I cede capitulation
Author notes
"I give up, I am tired of trying"
In a list
A contest entry
- HURRY ONLY 20 MIN by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended June 12, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow, what an amazing piece. <3
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Devotion?
'No more...I cede capitulation'
you have a masterpiece in words.
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Congrats on the gold!
Oh wow! This is a stunning piece hun...you always get the words so perfect
Awful when you put a lot of effort into something and they don't even notice. Superbly penned, congrats on gold 
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Very good for having 20 minutes to respond!! We BOTH know I could NEVER do it!!! hehehe!!! Congrats. on the Gold too!!!
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oooh, very worthy of the gold this one is. I like the way you have phrased this.
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Wonderful flow in this piece...Congrats on the gold!
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Awww wow!! wonderful!! loved the rhyme and rhythmic flow of your syllables. Grats on another golden beauty!!
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Wonderful!
wow...this is pretty nifty.
the emotion these poem brings is strong.
wonderful write.
i can relate, makes me think of the loyalty of some of my 'friends'.
God Bless
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wow, is all I can say. This poem really left me speechlesss. I love your choice of words and overall an amazing poem.
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Love it!! How frustrating.. and tiring.. I would give up too if someone doesn't notice that effort!
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