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you and me and rain on the roof (title of lovin spoonful song)

Lightning strikes,
your skin glistening in the flash.

Raindrops cover us as a cocoon
cooling the nova heated passions

Natures symphony plays
thunder the perfect percussion
rain the strings
breezes the woodwinds
lightning the brass giving accent to all

we touch and caress
kisses tracing paths of raindrops.
Starting from neck slowly to chest and stomach

mouth drenched as it swallows all nature gives

once more the thunder rolls and lightning flashes as the crescendo of our love in the rain is reached.
To the warm fire and a soft rug as we fall asleep in each others arms with sighs in remembrance 

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  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    June 12, 2008

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    Sensual and so romantic. Dreamy as the rain falls...sigh! I love this...let it rain.

    Best of luck!


  • TheDemonEve
    June 12, 2008
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    I've missed these pieces from you...

    But this piece is missing none of your former passion. Sensual and so heated. Lovely!!!