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All that was left

She was gone without an sensible explanation
Sitting confused in my car,
I glared at the heart she'd drawn on the window-
She played with fake affection

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I work with loneliness

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  • transit
    June 12, 2008

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    wow!

    I love your words and how poigant they are. The sadness is held through beautifully and the last line was simply amazing!!

    I like this interpretation as it is not abou love gain but about love lost. Good luck!

    transit~