Taken out of the world and put into a new
She sheds all that made her innocent
While confronting danger in the face,
she dares to let the new world in her
She shows others that life's not a check list-
scratching of what you do
It's life experiences that makes you 'YOU'
Author notes
It's obvious
A contest entry
- PIF...quickie.. by MaMa-2-be-Cindy.
1030 points, ended June 11, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellent write here with a nice sense of humor.
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Well I am not sure that this fit either of the 2 pictures but I thought that it was a great write anyway!! So filled with the truth....especially the last stanza. Very well done...with a powerful message should anyway wish to see it!
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yeah well your not exactly the winner when you reserve in a QUICKIE contest...but don't have your entry in, in time....sorry but ya missed out on this one...i sent out a note saying time was running out..and if you needed more to msg..
Cindy -
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I was going to take it out anyways
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