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May 12.

God's wrath surfacing
Shaking cement, tumbling
Buried thousands

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For parents who lost their children, and children who lost their parents.

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  • mwilson50
    June 12, 2008

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    Another Haiku

    I would perhaps suggest "burying thousands" for the last line to match tense, but that is just me. Anyway, it is a powerful haiku about (apparently) a devastating quake. Thanks for entering!


  • Rianna Bear
    June 12, 2008

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    eek, it's a terrible thing to be caught in a disaster such as these. it actually reminds of me of the horrible earthquakes that always hit the more less fortunate countries good job w/this and good luck toya

    ♥rianna