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Lost In My Love

I see you through the window,
you shine like heavens light,
your love is for another man,
now for you, I am lost in my own love.

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  • transit
    June 12, 2008

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    aaww

    I like the sadness behind these lines. The beginning is happy but towards the end, it becomes sad. The ending lines were poigant and it is sad when this happens but it is such a hard thing to let go. Good luck!

    transit~