Without saying a word which describes who You are
You are the God of the heavens
You created each star
You are always there
Even when I forget you
You always care
Your love takes the words from my mouth
You dont hold a grudge
You don't turn cold Your heart
When I fall
You catch me
Your arms surround me
And I am eternally greatful
For the love You have shown
Which has given me new life
Author notes
Grace was an awesome topic, i really hope i have captured it in this piece.
A contest entry
- grace: by Nicolette.
950 points, ended June 16, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I'm glad you liked the topic, and yes, you've captured God's grace so very well here.
What I liked about the poem is the sense of joy and gratefulness that seems to rise from each words, as well as the sincerity of voice you've displayed here... it almost reads like a prayer. Nicely done!
Thank you for this entry.
~ Nicolette
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