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Mi Amigos

My friends are rather broken,
hey don't need to be fixed,
we all have issues of our own,
so none of us are whole.

My friends are rather broken,
and I'd say they're always loyal,
but that would be a lie,
because we all slip up from time to time,
and perfect isn't real.

My friends are rather broken,
yet princesses they still remain,
princesses of God's kingdom,
beautiful, graceful, and kind,
are these princess friends of mine.

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I wrote this in eighth grade

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  • Xorlev
    July 12, 2008
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    I like it

    You're right, it's silly to think perfect is real. But it's the best we can get though.