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Bliss

Sweet bliss in sync to the twinning of hips
and the breathe that escapes bruised lips
at 3 in the morning on this idle tuesday in July.
Much more than sweat and sweet regret fills the heavy air.
The real love that we give is more than enough to submit, to sin-filled eves of celebration days.
One year of love laid out on this bed breathing a forever breath.
Promises casually slip off the tongue
whose only wish in early hours was to caress foul tastes of worry and fear from a lover's lips.
Fingertips roam and then clasp sealing this ever after romance
Eyes slip into tasty dreams of no other as the sun shines it's blessing on sleeping fools in love.

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  • Abe 1
    June 15, 2008

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    wowza dis again tells a fab story
    july is me birth month and yup its hot
    thanx for yr entry and gd luck
    abe


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    June 14, 2008

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    What a beautiful poem
    Your words flow so elegantly
    Paints a picture within your readers mind
    Good luck
    Julie