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spaces for deserved lots?

The mighty cat
grabbed the space
of the tiny parrot
parrots nest is occupied now

On earth too
big sharks
eat away the
properties belonging to weaker ones
by hook or crook
they take possession and settle

When will this cruel designs disappear
giving scope to the spaces for deserved lots?

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  • fortyninereasons gold member
    June 14, 2008
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    A very interesting look at the prompt. Thank you for your entry