Upon this garden bed
last night; laid her head.
Paradise truly found
an apricot moon; no sound.
Promise echo unspoken
two hearts; a golden token.
Sultry atmosphere sings
what this union will bring.
Stardust in his eyes
his dark purgatory realized.
All is not as it seems
his loving passion, his dream.
Author notes
Artist: Griffin
picture inspired: He's dreaming of love
A contest entry
- -♥-~*Beautiful*~-♥- by xwarriorXprincessx.
900 points, ended August 18, 2008, 54 entries
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Comments
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not to seem distracted
but i love that ur picture looks like patrick swayze holding stevie nicks. just thought i'd point that out to be random lol
lovely poem, friend. it is simple but sweet... so sweet. it's nice to see a sensitive male. it doesn't happy very often teehee extra cheers for that!
i like the 2 line format. it's different from what i'm used to but i like it. it's a delicate little rhyme... very nicely done. -
Beautiful romantic writing here. Again, your imagery is something else completely. Very very strong on that. I loved the rhyme in this too. Great flow to the piece. Well done indeed.
With
Dark
Love
Wayne Leon
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ddo you ever stop loving and being in love,, you romatic heart.. good luck
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love the phrasing (apricot moon) I dig the structure too, and the nice rhythm it creates. "His dark purgatory realized" is a sublime phrase, suggesting a complex contradiction between the dream of desire and the realization of the same. Well done!
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