It's a sudden wave
crashing down on you
a red hot
thunderbolt
from the sky
It's an epiphany
a shock
of the deepest kind
the opening
of an eye
It's a sudden
surprising
realization
a sharp quickening
of the senses
It's your barriers
blown away
annihilated
the demise of your
defenses
It's a rude
and unexpected
awakening
a cold rain
showering from above
It's the moment that
hits you
gun shot sudden
the one that tells you
this ...
...is love ...
Author notes
Love
A contest entry
- What Is...? 10/20 by Gypsie Ink.
450 points, ended June 20, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautiful!
I love this and where you took it...A provocative and captivating write! Thank you for entering and Best of Luck! -
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this is got to be the only love poem that has made me go "awwww... *sigh*" in a loooooooong time. -
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Thank yyou Oktobere...that's probably one of the nicest comments I believe I've ever received...thank you~
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it is....
x_x
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Hiya Lady....how have you been?
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