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The Look of Death !!

The Look of Death !

W. Peter Sanci


Well hi again my dear, dear friends. I have a rather sad, sad tale to tell you tonight.
I went to the hospital to see an old friend this afternoon, when I walked into his room I didn’t even recognize him he looked like such a fright.
He had lost so much weight, not that he was a big man to start off with.
They had shaved his head bald, and he was asleep, he didn’t even know I was there, he was breathing so hard,  I almost cried. There was no mirth.
My dear, dear friends, it is so sad to see, someone who you know to be in such a sorry state.
And it’s really sad for his family and friends, all they can do is to pray and wait.
So I hope that when you are in a hospital the next time,
You go in someone’s room just to say hi, and to watch
that person smile at you , is enough reward, as like when a
churchbell chimes.

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My friends ! I have writen this poem in hono of my good friend who is lying in the hospital dying of cancer ! I went to visit him yesterday and I didn't even recoginize him ! It is so sad ! Pleas pray for him and his family.

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  • Sandygram
    June 23, 2008

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    So Heartfelt

    Peter, I asm so sorry about your friend. My heart and prayers are with you. Death is never easy to cope with and truly hard when it lingers for months. You take care dear friend.

    Bless You,
    Sandy

  • Pietro456
    June 11, 2008
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    One of my Better Efforts !