Love that has no boundaries
and the smallest amount of
light will create a universe.
Author notes
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In a list
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XIII - by Desire.
700 points, ended June 15, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Boundaries and Light
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~
I kept seeing a hot dog~ and wild as it sounds a reference to it being nasty whether the taste or look or symbolic of something else~ Also being shown word: Lotto- and a lotto ticket~ Nowwwwwwwwwwwww I am hearing words faintly: Aunt-Uncle
whether Yours or somebody elses but getting those words- Strange as it sounds- was getting word: Interracial and then word: hiccup~ I'm being shown a dropper~ as if symbolism..Just a drop...hearing word: elixir in reference to Your essence needed
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
light will create a universe.
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Profound!
This magnificently condensed poem
packs a poweful punch. I see eternal
truth wrapped around each line.
It like rewriting history with a
few short strokes of your quill.
Brilliant!
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such wisdom in so few words. this is wonderful. thank you for sharing with me this afternoon and i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie
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