Love that has no boundaries
and the smallest amount of
light will create a universe.
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A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XIII - by Desire.
700 points, ended June 15, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - - Go for the Gold XI - (Pre-Writes...That's Right) by Desire.
700 points, ended December 24, 2009, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Welcome Back!
Thank You for Your Entry: Boundaries and Light
Appreciate Your Talent also Voice~
Honored to read once more~Adding more
also best wishes to You in this PW contest Sweet Soul
This will be judged shortly
Thank You for Your Patience
Many blessings too 
with much love and light~ Desire~*~
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Boundaries and Light
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~
I kept seeing a hot dog~ and wild as it sounds a reference to it being nasty whether the taste or look or symbolic of something else~ Also being shown word: Lotto- and a lotto ticket~ Nowwwwwwwwwwwww I am hearing words faintly: Aunt-Uncle
whether Yours or somebody elses but getting those words- Strange as it sounds- was getting word: Interracial and then word: hiccup~ I'm being shown a dropper~ as if symbolism..Just a drop...hearing word: elixir in reference to Your essence needed
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
light will create a universe.
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Profound!
This magnificently condensed poem
packs a poweful punch. I see eternal
truth wrapped around each line.
It like rewriting history with a
few short strokes of your quill.
Brilliant!
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such wisdom in so few words. this is wonderful. thank you for sharing with me this afternoon and i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie
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