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What's That?

"what is that?"
said johnny pointing
"that's my who who"
said suzy giggling

"yours is silly
yours is small
mine is bigger
mine is tall"

Let me see
said suzy mad
then he showed her
looking glad

"yours is silly
yours is big
yours is stupid
looks like a twig"

ten years later
in the back of a truck
suzy laughs at johnny
as they start to fuck

she debates whether to say it
but in the end she screws up big
she laughs and says
"Johnny it still looks like a twig!"

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  • WarriorMaiden
    June 13, 2008
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    OMG! Andrea, I love you!


  • daviscth silver member
    June 12, 2008

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    LOL!!! This is wonderful!! Thanks so much for posting.

    I do think you should list this under the adult section though.