The enemy I worked so hard to help them allude. Now stands at our door step begging for food. Four lives in ruin, three of which in slow rebuild.
Are now in danger of the collapse, of any remaining will. For what could the reason be? To want to torture ourselves once again; by the same vile disgusting fiend?
The fact that we are bound by blood is the only reason that I can think of. As well as their inability to put this basterd in his place. Whether it be because of fear, love, or loyalty it should leave them in disgrace.
For once this fool enters the halls it took us so long to build. His first task will be to take control and leave them to pay the bills. My biggest fear is that the hell we escaped will be bought to our new zip code here.
Leaving my sister to pay a $2,000 mortgage on a cage we once revered. I may be overreacting but their fear won’t vanish over night. But I’m used to fighting this scum fuck alone and with no one else in sight.
A contest entry
- HATE HATE HATE HATE by RawrSmileBabyPlz.
300 points, ended July 28, 2008, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Back to Where I was...... by the tempest.
475 points, ended July 27, 2008, 19 entries
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this was a well-written poem, however I'm not really sure I sensed enough of the hate here. I got little tidbits of it every once in awhile but there just isn't enough there for me
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Well I guess its back to the drawing board. But thanks for giving this a fair comment.
Allawy
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i only do what i want people to do... i want good honest comments that tell the truth so... no problem
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I Couldn't ask for anything more myself.
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well there's always more you COULD ask for... but are you actually going to ask for them??? nope
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Best to keep it simple most the time.
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haha agreed
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"For once this fool enters the halls it took us so long to build. His first task will be to take control and leave them to pay the bills. My biggest fear is that the hell we escaped will be bought to our new zip code here. " that was my favorite part i loved the whole poem lots thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck
..<3..
Shelly
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