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Outside The Box

If I take a step out, it might hurt

Is it safe for me to think

Outside the box?

 

I will be worthless if I

Stay inside

Is it safe for me to jump

Outside the box?

 

My eyes may water

And burn

Is it safe for me to peek

Outside the box?

 

I could get hit or shot

Is it safe for me to walk

Outside the box?

 

I shall never know

Because I will never go

Is it safe for me to ignore

What is outside the box?

Author notes

Number Seven.

What is outside the box?

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  • Gypsie Ink
    June 20, 2008

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    Interesting!

    so I take it we still don't know what is outside the box... I like the twist. Thank you for entering and Best of luck!


  • tarcus
    June 12, 2008
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    not funny sorry.


  • Yarri
    June 11, 2008
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    Great poem, the repetition makes it fun an' meaningful. Love this poem!


  • Sir Squigglim
    June 11, 2008
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    wow... that was amazing