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Brother

Missing image

He kept it hidden in the cellar
talked to it often
he liked it a lot
it never answered back
not like his brother...














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  • nichtmich silver member
    June 14, 2008

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    Holy Bates Motel Batman! At least that's what you make me think of, spot on prompt and unique take. A total fright in just a few short words!


  • completely mad
    June 12, 2008
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    this is creepy..haha I liked it alot...thanks for entering


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    June 11, 2008

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    I like this, this is Dark....

    All the best in the contest

    Love

    Suz
    xxx