My love for you is so strong
that i would never want to let it go
you make the world around me seem so simple
because im with you everyday...
I love the way we spend our time
even though we have our ups and downs
but most of all i love the way you are
even though you are so far away...
I think about you everyday
that the thoughts of you that make my day
with a big smile on my face just knowing
that your still here today...
Author notes
this is my first time trying to write a love poem!
A contest entry
- Fall Me In Love. by Pretty Britty.
1400 points, ended June 29, 2008, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please tell me what you think thanks =]
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this is a wonderful love poem i like the thoughts and the feelings you have expressed i like how you mentioned the ups and downs we all have those and i have plenty of the far away feelings too
keep up the wonderful writing
ɛiɜ ~Amy -
I think it definately discribes how love can make you feel about a person.
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great write!!! i think this is my fav! from the very first line i feel caught to it you kno?? the words.. the flow... oommgg! girl if i didn't know you i would have thought u plagerized this!!! lol. but i kno u didnt cuz u wrote this from your heart!
WOW!! THIS IS UR FIRST LOVE POEM!!!! holy buckets!!!! lol wow!! that is awesome girl!!
peace n love,
me
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interesting write...
it's a good simple poem of love try my poem, love condition
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Lol,
well for your first time it's pretty good!
A very simple love poem
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