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Night Time Romance

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With arms round each other we stop on the stair
your lips find their goal as you ruffle my hair
each step with a purpose, a night time of bliss
we stop at the top in a deep sensual kiss.

You scoop up my body and carry me through
to our little room, it's a haven for two,
you say not to peep as I’m laid on the bed,
I smile as the images race through my head.

The window is opened to sweet jasmine breeze,
euphoric and sexy, his actions a tease,
I'm pulled to my feet in his tender embrace,
the feel of his breath, a caress on my face.

Sweet music is playing we sway to the beat,
our bodies on fire when two passions meet,
I dance for my lover in time to the tune,
kissed by the breezes and bathed by the moon.

He lies and he watches as clothes hit the floor
his dancer of love has done all this before,
it's always exciting, a lovers delight,
our romantic evening turned into a night.

 

 

 


 

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This is a follow up poem to Evening Romance. Here is the link,
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4091143

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  • daviscth silver member
    August 25, 2008
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    This is beautifully done. Thanks for sharing.

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    June 19, 2008
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    Thank you for your entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • earthangel33
    June 18, 2008
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    wow

    ur work is amazzing....ur poems have such deep to them and insite.....i hope to read more soon

  • Eusebius
    June 16, 2008

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    bravo

    Ah, a quiet loving piece of poetry here, in the night, in the dark--not a creature was stirring! neat and nifty... bravo...


  • Maedes
    June 16, 2008

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    uhm clearly sexy and romantic...starting from the picture. Like the last stanza. Success in your contest


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    June 16, 2008

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    Oh my...heavenly! I want to book a night just like this PLEASE! The jasmin breeze...the little tease...all of it! The pic is perfect with this dear!!!


    Az


  • luna-midnight gold member
    June 16, 2008

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    awww great write, very sensual and beautiful, good luck in the contest and take care
    stephanie

  • carole21
    June 16, 2008

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    nice

    a very nice write for the prompt . . sincere and passionate . . liked "I smile as the images race through my head" and "kissed by the breezes and bathed by the moon" . . well done


  • Sabir Abdus Samee
    June 16, 2008
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    Good

    I am not good at writing sensual poem. I liked your poem.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 12, 2008

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    Oh so romantic and sensual!! Absolutely love this.. just how sensual writes should be!!!

    And I'm stealing that picture!!


  • darell
    June 12, 2008

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    Bravo!

    Get it on girl!lol! I love this piece.
    It was so darn romantic. Hot to the touch
    and delicious to the taste. you are an
    exquisite artist with alot of talent.
    I like the way you express yourself.
    I was taken on a carpet ride of romance
    and passion. Encore! encore!


  • For You. I Cry.
    June 12, 2008

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    that was amazing very well written and the flow is perfect you really worked hard on this piece it shows very well done


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    June 12, 2008

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    very sensual, yet not smutty. you did a good job weaving these words. thank you for sharing this with me today. viyanna rosemarie


  • honorable mention
    June 12, 2008
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    very sensual. good job


  • frownsnfreckles
    June 12, 2008

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    Wonderfully sensual and romantic. You made me wish I was about to race up the stairs with someone *sigh*


  • Endeavor gold member
    June 12, 2008

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    Very Good


    He lies and he watches as clothes hit the floor
    his dancer of love has done all this before,
    it's always exciting, a lovers delight,
    our romantic evening turned into a night.

    Like the soft rhyme to this
    Very nice verse to feature

    Rick


  • EeyoreUK
    June 12, 2008

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    The flow is wonderful in this write, it is also very dreamy and romantic. Best of luck, keep smiling and keep penning.


  • arafura gold member
    June 12, 2008
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    Very sultry and very well written...


  • ceegeeess
    June 11, 2008
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    Fine evening for a romanic night!

    our romantic evening turned into a night." It is as it should be!




  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    June 11, 2008

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    Beautiful picture and your words breathe life into it !!
    Well Done!!


  • cricketjeff gold member
    June 11, 2008

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    You are a very naughty Sue
    You wrote the things you want to do
    And what you want from your know who
    You naughty naughty girl

    You are a very clever Sue
    You wrote the way you wanted to
    The words all have to march for you
    You clever clever girl


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    June 11, 2008

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    Stunning imagery here. This played out in my mind so very well indeed. The rhyme and the flow of the piece was superb. You caught the emotion just right too. Superb, Sue.

    With
    Dark
    Love
    Wayne Leon
    x

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