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Woman Child

Images in black and white, words upon a page.
I hear your loneliness and see your silent rage.
Some times your words are uplifting, sometimes they shine darkly.
But most of all they cry out saying “Look, I am just me.”

I sit and look at soulful eyes as I pen this write.
I imagine an angel in the day, a devil in the night.
You are a wondrous combination, both a woman and a child,
an open-hearted friend but a fighter when you’re riled.

You’re looking to feel understood, a part of being loved.
Accepted for just being Britty and not forced or shoved
into a box of someone’s making based on a bizarre
idea of who they think you should be and not who you are.

I sit and write this love poem.  It’s written just for you.
It’s written from my heart and every word is true.
But it’s not a poem of romance or castles in the air.
It’s just one person saying that you’re valued…
                                                          …and I care.

To be loved by others, you must first love yourself…
Fall in love with Britty… I did.

 

 

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Prompt: write -me- a love poem if you wish, fall me in love with you
Picture Credit: Pretty Britty

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  • jackreed3 gold member
    June 13, 2008

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    That was Beautiful... You done a great job with this
    Piece...
    Your friend in Poetry.... JackReed3...


  • Lucy.
    June 11, 2008

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    How beautiful!!! Enough said. Very well done.


  • toomysterious
    June 11, 2008

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    What a wonderful love poem for the prompt. Such understanding thoughtfulness. Sign of a true friend. Just lovely. Good luck in the contest.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 11, 2008

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    Aww what a lovely tribute! You have an open heart which should indeed touch this person's own..

    Absolute truth in that ending, to be loved, we must first love ourselves!


  • MagicLady silver member
    June 11, 2008

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    Ken,
    You are such a warm loving person and give to others what you don't always get in return. I wish that you got half the love that you give to others. This poem is an example of your honest caring heart that is given to others......even if they are not part of your immediate circle of influence.

    Well done, friend.

    Cheryl


  • Pretty Britty
    June 11, 2008

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    Ohh, I love this write.
    You seem to have read me well, fellow poet
    and you have created quite a work of art with this piece.
    Well done, I must say.


    • KayJay
      June 11, 2008
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      ... "It’s written from my heart and every word is true." I hate to repeat myself () but sometimes you do just to make sure that you're understood...

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