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Sometimes ♪♪

You used to look at me
like I could set you free
when I walked in through the door
you knew what life was for
but everything is changing
my life is rearranging

.::. Chorus .::.
'cuz sometimes I matter
and sometimes I don't
your eyes will twinkle
and then they won't
I don't understand what I can do
to find out if I love you

We were walking in the dark
it was then you stole my heart
once our hands met
that's as close as we get
you pull away when I am near
and boy, you just aren't clear

.::. Chorus .::.
'cuz sometimes I matter
and sometimes I don't
your eyes will twinkle
and then they won't
I don't understand what I can do
to find out if I love you

So for right now I gotta let go
and accept what you do is just for show
it's hard because we were so close
you're the one with whom I shared the most
but you have to understand that you must choose
or I'm a girl you're gonna lose

.::. Chorus .::.
'cuz sometimes I matter
and sometimes I don't
your eyes will twinkle
and then they won't
I don't understand what I can do
to find out if I love you

Author notes

So yeah, I wrote this last night... I started to right a tune to it, but nothing sounded right, so I thought I'd just leave it as the song without a tune... ♪♫♪♫

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  • Psychotic Freak gold member
    4 hours ago
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    this. is. EPIC.
    seriously, Han, i can see this becoming a song very easily.
    keep writing, 'cause you're good at it.


  • Glass Heart
    June 11, 2008
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    I love it hon!! I love it, love it, LOVE IT!


  • omg-its-sara
    June 11, 2008
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    OMG this is so good!