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Rain (carry me away)

I set ...out...

from the ((comfort)) of my warm home

which is -lit- by the calm f.l.i.c.k.e.r.i.n.g of candles

the fresh air  ( FiLLs )  my lungs
and the rain D
              R
              O
                P
                S

lightly


on my --outstretched-- arms

I can feel the spongy grass beneath my toes
as I    RUN


.::. free .::.


of my insecurities and worries


and the first spring rain
carries me

    away.

Author notes

I love the rainn, especially in the summer! ♥

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 15, 2008

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    What an experiment is here bring a new meaning to the prompt and the messge interprtrted here..well done...my friend....