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Emerald Eyes

Never look away
Don’t tear your eyes away from mine
For when I said I could look into them forever
I meant it
So please don’t leave
Don’t deprive me
From those emerald beauties
When I look into those eyes
I see my future
With you
And when you leave
I am alone again
So stay with me
Just a little longer
And even when time steals your gaze away
Remember me
Wherever you go
Whoever you meet
When you look into her eyes
Think of me
And never look away
Because I will forever be lost
In your emerald eyes

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  • nilav
    June 19, 2008
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    ...be lost in your emerald eyes --captivating line..congrats on the trophy


  • BabyBun silver member
    June 11, 2008
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    beautiful and a little chilling...good luck


  • Kleroo
    June 11, 2008
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    This is perfect you nailed this contest head on best of luck