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heart true soul

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Quicken of heart true soul
There is heavenly healing every gift
From the highest essence within
Find the quite way of hope
Discover tranquility of loves delight
Bring forth inner truth, tender it sweetly

Breathe beauty breathe love
Share your heart with grace so elegant
Paradise now for humanity
No humiliation just joy’s elation
Love flows generously always Fluid
Rising on compassion’s healing light

Affectionate light’s radiant gentleness
Be of peace and harmony
Look only for the beauty in all
Let your love flow
Following as river a to the sea
For the time is now~

Author notes

Just for fun I made a image of myself as a Knight
I just revised this after receiving some well stated direction.

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  • Zenda-Lokki gold member
    June 12
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    Ha ha that is just great. You look very noble as a knight Sir.
    Wonderful poem.

  • aboomer silver member
    June 11

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    Handsome knight!!
    Lovely wording. I especially like,
    'Love flows generously always
    Fluid rising healing light'
    Nicely done!


    • rc3 gold member
      June 11
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      aboomer

      you so kind to say that. Thank you from my heart

  • azlyn gold member
    June 11

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    I love the message...and the knight is so handsome!!! That is so neat that you did that!!! I am impressed!!!

    Thank you for adding this to the reading list...please feel free to add as you wish brave Sir Knight!!!

    Love~
    Azlyn


    • rc3 gold member
      June 11
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      Azlyn

      Now I am blushing thank you for kind thoughts
      light and love

      • azlyn gold member
        June 11
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        ...That is part of being noble. Humble and fair...blue eyes that shine...like the brightest heavens.


  • PerfectImperfection
    June 11

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    A lovely piece of thought. My only suggesstion is the breaks in your lines seem to cut in awkward places; ex:
    "There is divine healing every
    Gift from the highest essence
    Within find the way of hope"

    Could be,
    "There is divine (divinity?) healing every gift
    From the highest essence within
    Find the way of hope..."

    And I think you meant "Breathe" - not breath.

    Just a thought. Overall I found this to be a nice piece of thoughtful affection and tenderness. Nice write!


    • rc3 gold member
      June 11
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      Perfectimperfection

      This is helpfully for i only have been writing for a short while and yes it should be breathe but my dyslexic thought that it was right. If only I had a proof reader.The words do move and shimmy on the page some times it is a struggle.
      warm light and love
      Robert

      • aboomer silver member
        June 11
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        If you ever want/need help proofing, let me know - I help others with theirs, be glad to help you if I can.
        best wishes

        • rc3 gold member
          June 11
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          aboomer

          I may take you up on this kind offer but each time i write it becomes easer and i am beginning to find the
          words that spell checker changes which are different than what i would have. You have a generous heart to offer this may you be blessed with all that you seek

          light and love
          Robert
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