Molten gold,
nestled into satin green
sheets,
quivered lazily around
polished black orbs
before drooping lashes
pull heavy drapes over
stained glass
windows
blocking out morning light
to slowly drift back
into dreaming.
Author notes
"write a poem about eyes"
A contest entry
- Eyes by BabyBun.
450 points, ended June 19, 2008, 36 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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congrats on the trophy..enjoyed this
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Ooh I really like this! Good luck
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Thank you so much for inspiring me to write for this contest, and for the prize.
Much love
carrie
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