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Stained Glass

Molten gold,
nestled into satin green
sheets,
quivered lazily around
polished black orbs

before drooping lashes
pull heavy drapes over
stained glass
windows
blocking out morning light
to slowly drift back

into dreaming.

Author notes

"write a poem about eyes"

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  • nilav
    June 19, 2008
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    congrats on the trophy..enjoyed this


  • BabyBun silver member
    June 19, 2008
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    Ooh I really like this! Good luck


    • McRae by nature
      June 19, 2008
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      Thank you so much for inspiring me to write for this contest, and for the prize.


      Much love
      carrie